Hello Fieldworkers!
Thanks to most of you for posting your Verbal Snapshot to our class blog. YAY! The first foray into our virtual fieldworking gallery worked! I made an executive decision to move Stacy and Rachael's pieces into the vessel with everyone else's, so as not to "feature" some and not others (this is the power of the teacher, people).
I urge you to scroll through your classmates' writing and to read it carefully, looking for things you like and ways you might revise or hone your own descriptive writing.
I'd also like you to read my comments--about specificity in word choice, casual (colloquial) vs. serious language, and about capturing the tone of your fieldsite. Reading each others' fieldwriting is an important lens through which we can consider our own writing.
And, remember, this is academic writing. This is research writing. This is writing that needs to be reminiscent of Jennifer Toth and rhetorical forms (ethos, pathos, logos). Push yourselves to live up to that high standard!
I also urge you to take the poll I created (look to the right). Happy reading, and see you in the Library tomorrow at noon.